DarkMatter's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doubles15 - Redesign]

Nice composition

I like the layout of the lab and the overall rendition, pretty good =D

Lintire responds:

Heya, man, thanks! I'm certainly proud of being able to whip up the background, if I do so say so myself.

[Gie a Job EH!!]

I like the shading and work on the right

I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but the left(or the right side from the figures POV) side is visually distorted. The hand is accepted as a gesture, but the shoe is noticebly different. it kinda looks like hes taking a step but the placement of his feet make it look like a full on fall. The shirt could use a lil more tone to contrast with his skin i suppose.

Beyond that, the face and everything else is pretty cool and rather funny xD

Uzilover91 responds:

Yeah, the feet are a little fucked. and the hands.
Weakest points.

I normally draw abstract as shit because of that.

Still thanks for the input.

[Scarlette High]

Really Really nice looking

The whole position of the cape and her pose kinda don't tell me much about where she's going. I assume she's like levitating upwards but her cape looks like she stopped in place. Just throwin that out there incase that's not what you wanted her to be doing in this particular scene.

Otherwise, this is a beaut, in more ways than one ;D

Xionscar responds:

Thanks!

Really, it's up to you to tell what she's doing... I imagine here pretty much the same way you said though, just flying all over and this is just one instance of her swooping / turning or whatever... the cape just has all sorts of energy that make the piece more lively. :)

[wat]

Good capture of the face

I think you rendered the face really well and in color to which is a bonus!

To improve I'd say use less line, because it is crippling your already mature style.
Also, try to clean up some of the fine details like the lines of the hair overlapping the line that defines the hat. Once again those lines can be a problem, where if that area was all values i'd be some Da Vinci caliber stuff.

Also the earings are kind of a line messes, really takes away from the picture as a whole.

Otherwise it's a very acurate and colorful rendering of the face!

SkittleBug responds:

Thank you very much for the honest review! I will remember that for next time I do a digital painting~

[Hello Tits]

hello tits indeed lol

overall pretty flawless manipulation of skin tones, the gray "x" on her stomach and the transparent loops on the top right kinda confused me.

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

I thought they were weird looking as well - It's part of her character design (which I didn't make) -- Thanks <3

[That One Girl!]

Some nice details in..

The Helmet and Breasts. The use of dark medium and light tones along with some reflected light can be seen melded in quite well, so obviously you spent alot of time there (you dog xD), however theres many weaknesses, specifically with the pose of the right arm, the angle it's portrayed has the arm at a 90 degree angle when it should porbably be angled more towards the viewer. Also, the whole thing would look alot more ocnvincing if the helmet cast a shadow on her leg.

GratuitousFlogginsMD responds:

Very good points. I can see the difficulties with the arm now that you mention it. I need to find an easier way to figure out how the light falls on the form. Perhaps a model is in order.

Yes the breasts are an area of main focus...Perhaps this is my Venus of Willendorf.

[See You In Shell]

I found Waldo!

He's kind of in multiple places xP

PopSecret responds:

good job!

[Tastes Like Kevin Bacon]

Hehe, quite thorough in the carnage.

I must say these drawing are very well laid out and depicted. I drew war scenes similar to this when I was your age perhaps even younger.

PopSecret responds:

oh cool and thanks for teh likes :3

[Pen-PornStar]

I believe this is Ava Lauren, a MILF =)

very nice rendering of the skin and its texture, I could be wrong on who the PS is but my initial reaction was that it was her, so I'm willing to bet.

lockebelmont responds:

Hmm i've been looking but have not found her again as of yet.