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Nice composition

I like the layout of the lab and the overall rendition, pretty good =D

Lintire responds:

Heya, man, thanks! I'm certainly proud of being able to whip up the background, if I do so say so myself.

I like the shading and work on the right

I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but the left(or the right side from the figures POV) side is visually distorted. The hand is accepted as a gesture, but the shoe is noticebly different. it kinda looks like hes taking a step but the placement of his feet make it look like a full on fall. The shirt could use a lil more tone to contrast with his skin i suppose.

Beyond that, the face and everything else is pretty cool and rather funny xD

Uzilover91 responds:

Yeah, the feet are a little fucked. and the hands.
Weakest points.

I normally draw abstract as shit because of that.

Still thanks for the input.

Really Really nice looking

The whole position of the cape and her pose kinda don't tell me much about where she's going. I assume she's like levitating upwards but her cape looks like she stopped in place. Just throwin that out there incase that's not what you wanted her to be doing in this particular scene.

Otherwise, this is a beaut, in more ways than one ;D

Xionscar responds:

Thanks!

Really, it's up to you to tell what she's doing... I imagine here pretty much the same way you said though, just flying all over and this is just one instance of her swooping / turning or whatever... the cape just has all sorts of energy that make the piece more lively. :)

Good capture of the face

I think you rendered the face really well and in color to which is a bonus!

To improve I'd say use less line, because it is crippling your already mature style.
Also, try to clean up some of the fine details like the lines of the hair overlapping the line that defines the hat. Once again those lines can be a problem, where if that area was all values i'd be some Da Vinci caliber stuff.

Also the earings are kind of a line messes, really takes away from the picture as a whole.

Otherwise it's a very acurate and colorful rendering of the face!

SkittleBug responds:

Thank you very much for the honest review! I will remember that for next time I do a digital painting~

I found Waldo!

He's kind of in multiple places xP

PopSecret responds:

good job!

Hehe, quite thorough in the carnage.

I must say these drawing are very well laid out and depicted. I drew war scenes similar to this when I was your age perhaps even younger.

PopSecret responds:

oh cool and thanks for teh likes :3

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